Another attempt at poetry...brace yourself for rhy

[Tyler Durden]

These are the halls of my abbadon
That shiver the tone of the Orpheus song.
But the eggshell walls and windows lie
And hide the day in which I die.

They moan in the voice of graveyard crows
And hold down the clock so the second hand slows.
Who'll litter my bed with flakes of lye
When all the world is gone yet I am alive?

Dark clouds reach high above this night
And conquer all.
Moon shine glints briskly at such height
it pours down these walls

Courage rising mounts that lingered pain
My lungs within me beg me draw down deep this breath again
You can stand here once I've gone
And walk these halls, my abbadon




[This message has been edited by Tyler Durden (edited November 08, 2000).]

[Miral]

I like. reminds me of another poem and here I sit and can't remember the name of the poet nor the poem itself...shit but I really liked this Tyler..really really good

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i thought it was too *VBG



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[tyledras]

its good Tyler. and actually the rhyming works well in this, adding to it rather than detracting. I like the images... I can really feel the emotion here.

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